Date: Mon, 25 Oct 2004 17:22:53 -0700 From: Tyler Brown Subject: Pre-Peer Review Validation of Comets 2004/October Delivery Steph, Here's a cleaned-up version of my Peer Review comments. Tyler ================================================================= To: S.McLaughlin From: Tyler Brown Date: 2004 October 6 Subject: Pre-Peer Review Validation of Comets 2004/October Delivery CC: M.A'Hearn L.Hall A.Raugh J.Wilf -------------------------------------------------------------- The following are comments relating to the October Comets 2004 submissions, submitted to the Planetary Data System (PDS) Central Node for validation by the PDS Small Bodies Node (SBN) at the University of Maryland. General ======= The volumes/datasets to be reviewed are: - Deep Impact Thermal-Vac tests 1-4 (DITV_0001-4) - SOHO images of Sun-grazing comets - Keck images of 81P/Wild 2 - Stardust CIDA data from the 81P/Wild 2 encounter (SDCIDA_0001) - Stardust DFMI data from the 81P/Wild 2 encounter (SDDFMI_0001) - Stardust NAVCAM 81P/Wild 2 data (SDNC_0003) - 81P/Wild 2 shape model derived from Stardust NAVCAM images - Stardust dynamic science data (SDDS_0001) - Stardust SPICE kernels (SDSP_1000) All data set catalog files must have the following five elements, new in the last 12 months or so: LABEL_REVISION_NOTE ARCHIVE_STATUS CURATING_NODE_ID CITATION_DESC ABSTRACT_DESC =============================================================== Deep Impact Thermal-Vac tests 1-4 (DITV_0001-4) ----------------------------------------------- DITV_0001 --------- Catalog Directory ----------------- dataset_tv1.cat: DATA_SET_ID = "DIF-CAL-2-GROUND-TV1-HRIIR-V1.0". Instead, let's use the standard dsid format, and call this: "DIF-CAL-TV1-2-GROUND-HRIIR-V1.0" and the DATA_SET_NAME = "DEEP IMPACT THERMAL-VACUUM 1 GROUND DATA FOR HRIIR INSTRUMENT". The dsid will need to be changed in all other files, labels Need CURATING_NODE_ID="SBN" CITATION_DESC is NULL - provide? Beef up conf_lev_note inst_hriir.cat - line17: Wheras it certainly constitutes an accurate description of Dr.A'Hearn, it may be more appropriate in this context to spell the "Principle" in "Principal Investigator" with a "pal". - The word demagnificationof is misspelled on line 47 ref.cat: ref objects need reformatting - I can do it if you like Index dir --------- The index file typically contains a column for the dsid Document directory ------------------ Suggest SPREADSHEET_DOCUMENT instead of XLS_DOCUMENT in complex document labels. The use of Excel is discouraged, unless also accompanied by csv files for each worksheet. Please report on resources required to convert, and include individual CSV files for each spreadsheet in this Excel file. pdsdd_di.full file is pdsdd.full + di keywords - is this the implementation we agreed upon? Also, not that the last two lines of the main PDSDD.FULL should be relocated to the end of the DI entries, instead of being left at the end of the main DD. =============================================================== DITV_0002 ========= Catalog Directory ----------------- dataset_tv2.cat: - The word fucus is misspelled on line 115 hrivis.cat: The word transmisssion is misspelled on line 37 The word namometers is misspelled on line 43 inst_hriir.cat: The word demagnificationof is misspelled on line 47 Document Directory ------------------ There are IDL routines in the templog subdir under the document dir. Should these be in the software directory? ./templog/temp_ext_hri.txt: The word supecedes is misspelled on line 40 ./reports/report_20020819.asc The word wavlength is misspelled on line 16 =============================================================== DITV_0003 ========= Document Directory ------------------ ./image_log/tv3_its.asc: The word focust is misspelled on line 32 The word ususally is misspelled on line 32 The word alighment is misspelled on lines 54 436 The word astignmatism is misspelled on lines 99 1792 The word foward is misspelled on line 611 The word offical is misspelled on line 1787 The word iamges is misspelled on line 2056 The word cude is misspelled on line 2174 The word definitly is misspelled on line 2348 =============================================================== DITV_0004 ========= Catalog Directory ----------------- dataset_tv4.cat: - Needs better conf notes - several ??? to be cleared up mrivis.cat: - The word tranmission is misspelled on line 37 - The word namometers is misspelled on line 42 inst_hriir.cat - The word demagnificationof is misspelled on line 47 hrivis.cat - Needs a better conf note - The word transmisssion is misspelled on line 37 - The word namometers is misspelled on line 43 Document Directory ------------------ There are IDL routines in the templog subdir under the document dir. Should these be in the software directory? ========================================================== SOHO ==== Root ---- Need aareadme.txt, errata.txt Catalog Directory ----------------- How old is Kreutz? soho_ds.cat: - DATA_SET_ID = "SOHO-C-LASCO-3-RDR-V1.0" you might add -SUNGRAZER- before the V1.0 - The word occassionally is misspelled on line 107 - The word Occassionally is misspelled on line 183 soho_mis.cat: The word anomally is misspelled on line 73 sohoinst.cat: The word interferomter is misspelled on line 34 soho_ref.cat: The word Investiagtors is misspelled on line 21 Calib Directory --------------- calib/filter: A pointer to the PNG files should be included in the label files, along with the one for the TAB files. calib/quantum_eff: A pointer to the PNG & PS files should be included in the relevant label files, along with the one for the TAB files. Document Directory ------------------ docinfo.txt: The word refered is misspelled on line 35 ./telemetry_stats/tm_stat.txt: The word documention is misspelled on line 21 ./handbook/handbook.txt: The word ObservingSequences is misspelled on line 52 The word PublicationPolicies is misspelled on line 56 The word accessability is misspelled on line 74 The word esentially is misspelled on line 433 The word succesfully is misspelled on line 438 The word relevent is misspelled on line 461 The word overlaping is misspelled on line 483 The word maintaing is misspelled on line 1022 The word diffrated is misspelled on line 1037 The word defocussing is misspelled on line 1198 The word contoller is misspelled on line 1329 The word eraseable is misspelled on line 1594 The word turbulance is misspelled on line 1792 The word exercize is misspelled on line 1801 The word timeporal is misspelled on line 1820 The word magneteograms is misspelled on line 1890 The word acqired is misspelled on line 1900 The word reformated is misspelled on line 1923 The word consorium is misspelled on line 2327 The word accessable is misspelled on lines 2400 2406 =============================================================== WILD2_KECK ========== Catalog Directory ----------------- catinfo.txt: The word aquired is misspelled on lines 15 39 The word Senors's is misspelled on line 35 OBS378T2.CAT: DATA_SET_ID = "EAR-C-I0039-1-SBN0007-KECKIIESI-V1.0" I doubt this is CODMAC 1. CODMAC data is Raw Data; Telemetry data with data embedded. These are images, and they should be something between 2 and 5. These are pretty raw images, so I'd pick 2. OBS378T2host.CAT looks odd, but appears valid. Catalog/target: - Let's not list each calibration star individually. Use STAR. - calibration_none.cat is an odd filename. Also, the calibration target file should either be a generic or very specific. So, make a keckcalib.cat, or use an existing generic calibration catalog file. You might correlate with DI calibration targets. - calibration_sky.cat: you might use existing "SKY", "BLACK SKY" or "DARK SKY". - I'm not clear as to whether subdirs are allowed off of catalog. What happens is that the pointers in the data files get confused, since they expect these to be in the CATALOG directory. Let' get rid of the star target files, download the existing cat for SKY, and come up with a better option for NONE. Then put them in the CATALOG directory. Index Directory --------------- The first field in the index.tab file has what appears to be two forward-slashes in a row (ex: DATA/2003DEC19/PROCESSED//2003DEC19/PROCESSED/esi0014.lbl). Document Directory ------------------ model_desc.txt: The word uncertatinties is misspelled on line 25 ./templog/temp_ext_hri.txt: The word supecedes is misspelled on line 40 =============================================================== Stardust ======== CIDA_0001 ========= It states in the ds cat that these data are level 1 spectra, and so the DSID has a codmac 1 in it. I would think these data are codmac 2, since they aren't raw telemetry. This may be a small distinction, but let's think about it. Catalog Directory ----------------- Be sure that the DATA_SET_NAME is in all caps. Index Directory --------------- There is no DSID in the index.tab file Document Directory ------------------ calexmp_old.pdf is not labeled. What is it anyway? Data Directory -------------- Data are tables with attatched labels - detatched are suggested, but not required. =============================================================== SDDFMI_0001 ----------- One data file? One data file! Document Directory ------------------ dfmical.asc: - The word mirco is misspelled on line 243 Otherwise, no problems! =============================================================== SDNC_0003 --------- Catalog Directory ----------------- dataset.cat: line 461: three 301 x 301 pixel pixel windows. Do you want 'pixels' doubled? line 590: Is 'decomutated' spelled correctly? Aren't there two m's? Index Directory --------------- index.tab: no dsid Data Directory -------------- whats "tmp"? label.rpt is litter. Please remove. There are several new keywords that will have to be pushed through the Standards process: n0643we02.img: SCAN_MIRROR_ANGLE SCAN_MIRROR_RATE SCAN_MIRROR_TEMPERATURE SATURATED_PIXEL_COUNT n0643we02.img: lvtool says that the checksum = 0... god knows why, because it isn't... Perhaps a tool problem on our end, but just to be sure, have a look at the file. =============================================================== sdds_0001 ========= Root Directory -------------- voldesc.cat: - Remove comma from end of line 54 Catalog Directory ----------------- dataset.cat: - Remove embedded quotes from lines 174-5. =============================================================== sdsp_1000 ========= ck/sdu_nc_rec.lbl and others: SPACECRAFT_NAME: instead of this, use INSTRUMENT_HOST_NAME = "STARDUST" PLATFORM_OR_MOUNTING_NAME not currently a keyword ck/sdu_sc_rec_1999_v2.lbl and others: We have previously used INSTRUMENT_HOST_NAME = "STARDUST" and INSTRUMENT_NAME = "SPICE KERNELS" Check phase names!