PDS/SBN Comet Data Review
Typos/Corrections from Matthew Knight
Mach 3, 2013

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dif-c-mri-5-epoxi-hartley2-photom-v1.0/

catalog/dif.cat
-Clock correlation section: The texts states that as of early 2009 there
 was a plan to have clock corrections. Are these available yet? If so, 
 the text should be updated.

catalog/epoxi.cat
-Mission timeline: the following were listed under DIXI/Hartley 2:  but 
 I didn't see them in the body of the document: "HRII Spectrometer 
 Cooldown", "Flyby and Closest Approach".
-The last paragraph under "Recommended Reading > EPOXI" is slightly
 different in different copies of epoxi.cat in different datasets. This
 seems to be the only difference.
-Under "Mission Data", should those datasets already archived by PDS have 
 the full PDS reference given?
-Under "Mission objectives": should the tenses here be past?

catalog/mri.cat
-"Instrument Overview", "The filter wheel..." paragraph: Consider giving
 a reference for the Hale-Bopp filter sets (e.g. Farnham et al., 2000)

catalog/ref.cat
-Under "EPOXI General": both BODEWITSETAL2013 and KLAASENETAL2011 say 
 they have been submitted to Icarus. Do they have references? I cannot 
 find the Bodewits one on ADS, and the most promising one for Klaasen is
 titled "Stardust-NExT NAVCAM calibration and performance"  
 (http://adsabs.harvard.edu/abs/2013Icar..222..436K) with a different 
 author list. If so, shouldn't it be KLAASENETAL2013? [NOTE: this appears
 in multiple datsets so please crosscheck]
-Under "DIXI Journal Publications", I think LIVENGOODETAL2009 should
 be LIVENGOODETAL2011 for the paper "Properties of an Earth-Like Planet 
 Orbiting a Sun-Like Star: Earth Observed by the EPOXI Mission"
 (http://adsabs.harvard.edu/abs/2011AsBio..11..907L) [NOTE: this appears
 in multiple datsets so please crosscheck]

document/hartley2-photometry_report.pdf
-It would be useful if this document had page numbers
-p.2, line 2: "Klaasen, et012" -> "Klaasen, et al., 2012"
-p.2, line 16: Belton et  al. 2012 should be 2011
-p.5, line 1: "process in" -> "process is"
-p.6, line 1: "result images" -> "resulting images"
-p.8, line 1: "method use" -> "method we used"
-p.8, line 5: "output save" -> pick one of these two
-p.10: Do Bodewits et al. 2013 and Klaasen et al. 2012 have full references
 yet?

document/hartley2_mri_anomaly.pdf
-p.6, paragraph 2, line 5: "up by the" -> "up by"




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dif-m-hriv-3_4-epoxi-mars-v2.0/

catalog/dataset.cat
catalog/dataset.cat
-line 144: "Klaasen, et al. (2008)" -> "Klaasen, et al. (2006)" 
 [occurs in all epoxi-earth and epoxi-mars dataset.cat files; also occurs
 on line 529 of dif-e-hriv-3_4-epoxi-earth-v2.0/catalog/dataset.cat]
-line 309: "image when is" -> "image when it is" [occurs in all epoxi-earth
 and epoxi-mars dataset.cat files]
-line 316: "orientation FITS" -> "orientation of FITS" [occurs in all
 epoxi-earth and epoxi-mars dataset.cat files]

catalog/hriv.cat
-line 39: "reflected" -> "reflects" [also in dif-e-hriv-3_4-epoxi-earth-v2.0/]

catalog/ref.cat
-see KLAASENETAL2011 comment in dif-c-mri-5-epoxi-hartley2-photom-v1.0 
 section [Goes for all epoxi-mars and epoxi-earth datasets]
-Should Crow et al. 2011 (http://adsabs.harvard.edu/abs/2011ApJ...729..130C)
 be referenced somewhere? [Goes for all epoxi-mars and epoxi-earth datasets]



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dif-m-mri-3_4-epoxi-mars-v2.0/
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dif-e-hriv-3_4-epoxi-earth-v2.0/
All comments discussed previously

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dif-e-mri-3_4-epoxi-earth-v2.0/
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