DIF-E-HRII-3/4-EPOXI-EARTH-V2.0 Catalog ======= o In the dataset.cat file description, please add full citations to the Calibration papers (i.e., as footnotes in the text – in addition to the REFERENCE objects that also exist). o In dataset.cat. the CITATION_DESC year must be '2014' since this is when the data were reviewed and released to the public. o In dataset.cat, the DESCRIPTION is lacking the usual summary of why the data were taken in the first place. A sentence or two should be added to address this. o The EPOXI mission.cat description misstates the wavelength coverage range of the HRII instrument. This should be corrected. o If there was a rationale for choosing/changing the position of Earth within the slit, it was not clear. If there was one, please document it and/or point to existing documentation with a description of the observing strategy. (If this is very short it could be incorporated into the dataset.cat DESCRIPTION field.) o Voldesc.cat references "EARTH.CAT", which is not in the data set. The reference should be removed from voldesc.cat. Documents ========= o Ensure these data sets have the latest versions of these document files: day_of_year_calendar.lbl epoxi_cal_pipeline_summ.lbl epoxi_sis.lbl instruments_hampton.lbl pdsdd_epoxi.lbl quaternion_desc.lbl o In epoxi_sis.pdf: - This document says labels for HRIV, MRI, and ITS level 3/4 data, PDS keyword PROCESSING_HISTORY_TEXT contain FLAT_PRO= FLATCONS= FLATTEMP= CALWINDW= CALWINPY= but the sample labels in the SIS's 4.4.4.1 and 4.4.4.2 do not. - p. 27: "DIF-L-HRII-3_4-EPOXI-LUNAR-CALS-V1.0" should have a / not a _ i.e. "DIF-L-HRII-3/4-EPOXI-LUNAR-CALS-V1.0" - epoxy_sis.pdf pages 47-9 the figures are misaligned with the text. This needs to be corrected in every copy of the document in all data sets. o There are summary files with names like “hriv_3_4_epoxi_garrad.pdf”. In at least some of these labels in some data sets, the Julian Date field is described as being in the form “YYYYMMDD”. This needs to be fixed if it applies to this data set. o In places that describe the file naming convention, there needs to be a clear indication of which time (beginning, middle, end) is used for creating the file name. o Need more description of "spectral scanning mode". Could be in the dataset.cat DESCRIPTION, if it's short, or in a separate document that can be referenced as needed. o Please add at least one or two examples of displayed/plotted spectra as an example for users who are working with the data, preferably with a recipe for reproducing them from the data/ o AAREADME.TXT should point users to the essential, point-of-entry type documentation. o Consider adding a browse facility for this data set, if resources permit.