New Horizons LORRI
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NH-J-LORRI-2-JUPITER-V2.0
NH-J-LORRI-3-JUPITER-V2.0
NH-X-LORRI-2-LAUNCH-V2.0
NH-X-LORRI-3-LAUNCH-V2.0

- Additional noise apparent in the smear area of the image needs to be addressed. 

- If possible, add a preprint of the calibration paper.

- If possible, provide a list of likely targets in the field of view for launch data.

- Position and target information are not in nh-x-lorri-2-launch-v2.0 and
  nh-x-lorri-3-launch-v2.0.

- nh_mission_trajectory not listed.

- Exposure time should include units.

- Smear: Error is 8 vs 1.3 outside of affected area -- when DN image in the FITS file is 
  compared to the error image, is the error >50% of the background signal?

- Calibration paper is not included or accessible.

- Possibly provide processed images in the archive.

- Include target list or any observing log.

- Make sure document/owenetal2012.{lbl,pdf} files get added to LORRI EDR data sets; they 
  are currently only in RDR data sets.

- j.nh-j-lorri-3-jupiter-v2.0/data/20070611_*/*.lbl: All 4 labels in these directories have
  near duplicates only in TELEMETRY_APPLICATION_ID = "0x630" or "0x636".

aareadme.txt

	- "hierarchiachal" needs to be changed to "hierarchical"

	- All '*.txt' files should have an attached PDS3 label, not a detached
	  one

	- 'overview' of PDS label structure doesn't belong here. 

	- "FITS Suport Office" should be "FITS Support Office" (line 489)

catalog/

	dataset.cat
	
		- g.nh-x-lorri-2-launch-v2.0: DATA_SET_NAME = "NEW HORIZONS LORRI 
		  POST-LAUNCH CHECKOUT RAW V" needs a version number

	nh.cat

		- Line wraps in the second paragraph of "Misison phases" need to be better
	 	  formatted. 

dataset.cat

	- ABSTRACT_DESC: "This is VERSION of this data set" is missing version number.

	- Include a note about the accuracy of the target identification.

	- Modify the description of the location of the comet in the dataset.cat file that
	  talks about “line and sample” to emphasize PDS label keyword references, and add 
	  an explanatory comment re: location of origin.

	- clarify in dataset.cat that “location in line and sample” means “rows and 
	  columns” or “y and x”

 	- “LORRI updates for Data Sets V2.0”, first CAVEAT: “These were trivially derived
	  from other information in the labels i.e. the project was doing the user’s work 
	  for them” comment should be removed. 

	- "Caveats about TARGET and observational intent": The phrase "meta-data data" is
	  redundant (paragraph 1, line 6). "unpredicatable" should be changed to 
	  "unpredictable" (paragraph 1, line 7).
Document/
		
	soc_inst_icd_intro.pdf: Pages i through x should not be included.

	docinfo.txt: The files should be alphabetical.

 	samples/

		-  DATA_SET_ID = "NH-X-LORRI-2-PLUTOCRUISE-V1.0" and  DATA_SET_ID = 
		  "NH-X-LORRI-3-PLUTOCRUISE-V1.0" cannot be found.

		- No description of what is archived here.

		- Use {} instead of ()

Introdoc.pdf

	- The word "developed" is not necessary (line 2)

	- "!25-30" looks like a mistake (paragraph 3, line 5).

	- "or the nominal" should be changed to "for the nominal" (paragraph 
	  3, line 7).

	- "raw pixel values (Data Numbers; DNs) theoretically range" should be changed to 
	  "raw pixel values' (Data Numbers; DNs) theoretical range" (paragraph 7, line 2).