all *_description.txt files: -Non-ASCII characters -Last line of 2nd paragraph: "Critean" -> "Chretien" documents/bopps_1000.xsd -: "aqcuire" documents/boppssis.pdf -Throughout the document "data" should be plural, not singular -p.1: Should the effective date be "2015" instead of "2016"? -p.2: To whom should questions/comments be addressed? [line appears truncated] -p.5, S3.1, line 7: "the comet ISON" should use the official designation "comet C/2012 S1 ISON" -p.5, last line: "C/2013 Siding Spring" -> "C/2013 A1 Siding Spring" -p.7, S3.2, line 8: "Temperatures and relays data" -> "Temperature and relay data" -p.15-16 pcx1, paf5, paf6, paf7, paf8, paf9: "PANSTARRS" -> "Comet PANSTARRS (C/2012 K1)" -p.16 sif1-sif6: "Siding Spring Comet" -> "Comet Siding Spring" -p.17, siha, sihb, sica, sicb, scf1, scha, scca: "Siding Spring" -> "Comet Siding Spring (C/2013 A1)" -p.17 jaha: "Jacque" -> "Jacques" -p.18 jacb, jacc: "Co2" -> "CO2" -p.19, S3.6 is indented relative to other text on the page. -p.20, S3.7 text in paragraphs is indented differently than rest of document -p.20, S3.7.2, para 3, line 2: I think "deviation_right" should be "deviation_az" -p.21, ra_cmd, dec_cmd: What are the units? -p.21, telequat*: non-defined values are 999.00000? -p.24, S3.7.5, line 3: "Appendix 8" -> "Appendix A" -p.24, last line: "The standard deviation of two differenced" seems to be truncated. From XML, I think it should read "The standard deviation divided by the square root of two differenced bias frames. Fields 'file1' and 'file3' identify the two raw bias images used." -Appendix: Throughout the appendix there are references to "see Appendix". Should these say "see Appendix B"? -The paragraph starting on p.77 and going to p.78 switches verb tense. Should be in past tense throughout to be consistent with rest of Appendix A. groundcalibration/photon_transfer_test/*.xml -read_sigma_sqrt2: "of two of two" -> "of two"