General Liens for all New Horizon data sets (Dec 2016 peer review) ------------------------------------------------------------------ * Last updated 2016-12-14 by SBN:T.Barnes Ensure that all PDF files are PDF/A-1a or PDF/A-1b compliant. file: 'aareadme.txt' --> Boiler Plate commands to pipeline not deleted: "skel_DELETE_BETWEEN_IF_INSTRUMENT_IS_rex" file: 'catalog/dataset.cat' --> Remember to update the 'Review" section in DATA_SET_DESC from TBD. --> Several ABSTRACT_DESC are lacking or may be incomplete as compared to the rest of the data sets. Ex: ALICE/PEPSSI/SDC PC and LORRI launch/jupiter/PC file: 'catalog/nh.cat' --> It is stated twice that the "spacecraft closest approaches were 13,678 kilometers ..." (also in mission phase section), but SPICE as currently available at NAIF gives 13,674 km. Note the 13,678 vs 13,674. --> "Mission phases and sub-phases in data products" uses sub-phases that are not defined "ACO#" "AP#" "DP#" --> Under the Summary section, the 'Trajectory' description second line is not aligned with the first line. file: 'catalog/nhsc.cat' --> I prefer for wavelength ranges of instruments to be provided rather than just the general "visible" and "infrared" description. --> Incomplete sentence: "Operational requirements for catalyst bed heater ..." stops with "bed heater". file: 'catalog/ref.cat' --> Remove ITAR documents. --> Note that not all data sets have the most current copy of this file. file: 'document/aareadme_bu.txt' --> Boiler Plate commands to pipeline not deleted: "skel_DELETE_BETWEEN_IF_INSTRUMENT_IS_rex" file: 'document/docinfo.txt' --> The quote/ditto (use of ") is a minor issue, but seems to have confused at least a few reviewers. --> line 51: 3) SOC Instrument Interface Control Document (aka the 'ICD') => 1) and 2) provide the file name, it would be best to use the file name when possible. In this case: soc_inst_icd.pdf. Same applies for reference 4) on line 76. This lien was for LEISA, but apply almost across the board. --> typo: "backgound" => "background" near entry for "LUNINEETAL1995.PDF" file: 'document/nh_mission_trajectory.lbl' --> typo: "quantitities" => "quantities" --> typo: "intrument" => "instrument" file: 'document/nh_trajectory.tab' --> nh_mission_trajectory.tab contains the trajectory of the whole mission, nh_trajectory.tab covers the first half of 2007 (Jupiter phase). Suggest to remove the latter. Mentioned as MVIC lien, but may apply for most other data sets. file: 'document/soc_inst_icd.pdf' --> pg iv TOC: The SDC hyperlinks do not work correctly. --> pg 3, #5, 4th bullet: add **text**: "temp_dir - Location for temporary storage used by **the** code" --> pg 54, table 10-2, 10-3: Data format not consistent with the specifications in these two tables. This is probably a lack of clarity in the document description regarding bytes vs. fields. --> pg 67, 10.3.6: Information outdated, and conflict with 10.3.13 --> section 11: There appears to be no description of ApIDs 0x695-0x698. Are these included by mistake or do they need to described properly here and elsewhere? --> pg 76, 11.1.2 par 1: Missing period at end of 3rd sentence, which ends in "Figure 11-3". --> section 11.3: There should be a reference to Table 11-1. --> pg 89, 11.4.1.2 par 0: typo: 'Through 2010, the typical' => 'The typical' --> pg 104, 11.4.5.3.1: There is a problem with the equation here: "We could also write n' = n' += ! n'" The ' ' is missing a character that does not print correctly. It should be 'q'? --> pg 127, 13.2.4: states to see section 115, but where is that? --> pg 129, 13.3.1.1: The sentence "See for a plot of Charge vs DN represented by the Fit Coefficients." should reference the plot below, Figure 13-2 --> pg 130, 13.3.2.*: equations are formatted wrong ("Y" appears throughout the equation where there should be a symbol indicating multiplication) --> pg 130, 13.3.2.1: hyperlink to ResearchGate.net not very helpful without more info on James et al 2010 paper. --> pg 134, 14.1, par 2: Sentence starts with "shows a cross section". --> pg 135, 14-2: Caption correction (**changes**): "Diagram of New Horizons spacecraft **highlighting the location of the** SWAP instrument on the left. On the right **is a ** diagram of the SWAP ..." --> pg 136, 14.3: The summary data (0x585) from SWAP needs to be describe what product levels will exist and where. Currently there is level 2 and expected to be level 4, but no level 3 data. --> pg 136, 14.3 par 1: Suggest rewriting this section (**change**): "Housekeeping, messages, **summary,** and memory dump provide engineering data and the other *two* modes contain science data. ... For **[delete science]** summary and science histogram modes, ...". The last change happens twice in this paragraph. --> pg 137, 14.3 par 3, last sentence: change "are not" -> "is" and add more details (**changes**): "The summary data 0x585 packet **is** included in the PDS SWAP data sets**; however, they are delivered as a level 2 product only. It was found that the solar wind speed, density, and temperature provided in the summary packet were not adequate for science studies of the solar wind. These values will be included in the PDS data set for SWAP as a Level 4 data product**." --> --> May want to make this change present tense since the products are expected to be reviewed shortly. --> pg 140, 14.4.2 (**suggested changes**): "Summary packets are **[delete 'no longer']** included in the SWAP PDS delivered data sets**; however, they are delivered as a level 2 product only**." --> pg 144, 14.5.4 par 1: combine second and third sentences: 'for the rates. The errors and include an error' => 'for the rates, and an error' --> pg 145, 14.5.7 par 1: Add **text** to sentence as shown: "In the tail **of the Jupiter encounter,** the spacecraft is spinning so we ..." --> pg 148, 14-10: In the caption, remove second 'of' from the sentence: "Two minutes of data set **of** measurements ..." --> pg 153, 14-12: In the caption, remove the words 'in the' from the second sentence: "The y-axis **is in** the energy per charge." --> pg 155, 14.9: Change underscore to whitespace: '(CEM)_detector' => '(CEM) detector'