Comments by SBN:T.Barnes for the 2022-10-18 peer review. =============================================== NOTE: =============================================== Datasets Validated: urn:nasa:pds:gbo-lowell::1.0 urn:nasa:pds:gbo-lowell:lowellphot::1.0 =============================================== Errors for: GLOBAL (all datasets) Missing context objects: --> urn:nasa:pds:context:telescope:lowell-anderson_mesa.hall_ritchey-chretien_1_1m07 --> urn:nasa:pds:context:instrument:multi-host.kron_photometer file: 'lowellphot/collection.xml' --> Reminder for SBN or provider to provide DOI information in this file for the collection. --> I recommend change in case the range of data changes and you wish to supersede the data set instead of creating a new data set. files: 'lowellphot/data/lowellphot18may21apr.csv' --> There are 2374 cases of "NaN" values in this file. Please replace with a valid ASCII_Real value. --> The first column is described as a UTF8_String, but would it be more useful for it to be a date format (ASCII_Date_*). This would require changing the format of the column since the current date values are not in a valid PDS format. file: 'lowellphot/overview.xml' --> Sanity check, are all of these papers (<External_Reference>) necessary to understand this data or in the creation of this data product? Should any of these be moved to the collection.xml file? From what I can tell, none of these are mentioned in the overview document itself.