=============================================== NOTE: (1) Liens from the 2024-09-24 peer review. =============================================== Datasets under review: urn:nasa:pds:nh_derived:shape_models::1.0 =============================================== Errors for: urn:nasa:pds:nh_derived:shape_models::1.0 issue: Make this collection specific to the Porter (2024) Arrokoth Shape model, instead of generic for all NH shape models. --> Update the 'collection.lblx' . This includes the and <Citation_Information> --> Update the collection 'overview.{lblx,txt}' files. file: 'collection.lblx' --> formatting: <Identification_Area> should be on a new line --> Ensure there are authors and/or editors added to the <Identification_Area><Citation_Information> --> Add a <Modification_History>. --> Please add to the Identification_Area.Citation_Information.description a <Funding_Acknowledgement> statement. --> Add a <Reference_List> and as a member an <internal_reference> to the overview document. Don't forget to add a <comment> stating that this is an overview description of the collection. --> The shape model says it used some/all resolved LORRI images from the Arrokoth encounter. Please add to the <Reference_List> a Source_Product_Internal reference to urn:nasa:pds:nh_lorri:kem1_cal::1.0 collection. Don't forget to add a <comment> stating that all of the resolved images between X and Y times were used. --> Add to the <Reference_list> an <external_reference> to the Porter et al. (2024) paper if published and don't forget to add an <description> stating this is the paper that describes XYZ. --> Add a <Context_Area> and add target of Arrokoth, mission(s), spacecraft, and LORRI instrument. --> The Collection.collection_type should be "Data" not "Document" as currently presented. file: '{overview.txt,lblx}' --> typo in txt: "THe SOC" => "The SOC" --> The .lblx file lists three editors [Enke, B.; Gobat, C.; Crombie, M. K], whereas the .txt file lists only one editor [Crombie, M. K], who probably took over the revision. Perhaps a 'Creation' section should be included in the .txt file? --> --> Inconsistency between label and document about who the author/editors are. Suggest to move Kate to be the author. file: 'arrokkoth_porter_2024.lblx' --> Identification_Area.Citation_Information.description have details I would expect in a file description, not a citation description. Please remove the lines from "The shape model has the following internal format" to the end. Perhaps you can add it as a File_Area_Ancillary.File.comment? But most/all of this structure is described in the PDS label; it does not need to be duplicated here, but may be duplicated in the File_Area_Ancillary.File.comment. --> The Identification_Area.Citation_Information.description says it used some/all resolved LORRI images from the Arrokoth encounter. Please add to the <Reference_List> a Source_Product_Internal reference to urn:nasa:pds:nh_lorri:kem1_cal::1.0 collection. Don't forget to add a <comment> stating that all of the resolved images between X and Y times were used. --> Reference_List, should include an <external_reference> to the published paper Porter, et al. (2024b), not just to the internal copy. --> Context_Area.* Context name mismatch. Please update the following <name> for the LID: --> --> for urn:nasa:pds:context:investigation:mission.new_horizons_kem1 => "New Horizons Kuiper Belt Extended Mission" --> --> for urn:nasa:pds:context:instrument_host:spacecraft.nh => "New Horizons" --> --> for urn:nasa:pds:context:instrument:nh.lorri => "LOng Range Reconnaisance Imager" --> --> for urn:nasa:pds:context:target:trans-neptunian_object.486958_2014_mu69 => "(486958) Arrokoth" --> Update the Reference_List.Internal_Reference.comment for urn:nasa:pds:nh_derived:shape_models:porteretal2024b to reflect it is for this shape model and that it describes how the model was created. The current comment does neither. I do not believe the rest of the content is relevant. --> May want to add a warning to the user that may be trying to calculate volume using the shape model of the overlap issue. --> Add coordinates units (km) in the VERTEX table. This should not be hidden in a description. Also add to the other tables as appropriate. --> Add uncertainty of these angles (7 digits in file) --> Indicate the unit of angles (= deg) defining IAU rotational parameters. file: 'porteretal2024b.lblx' --> Should include a DOI external_reference to the published paper in the Reference_List if it is published. If added, please also add a <description> stating that this is the published version of the draft paper included in this collection. --> In the Identification_Area.Citation_Information.description, please mention that this is a draft of published or soon to be published paper. --> Context_Area.* Context name mismatch. Please update the following <name> for the LID: --> --> for urn:nasa:pds:context:instrument_host:spacecraft.nh => "New Horizons" --> Suggest to add to the Context_Area the LORRI instrument if deemed appropriate. file: 'porteretal2024b.pdf' --> Summarize fitted Hapke parameters (except SSA) in a Table (section 3) --> Add a scale bar to Figure 3. --> Add a warning to the user that may be trying to calculate volume using the shape model of the overlap issue. issue: missing albedo texture map. --> The PNG albedo map was not included, please include. Please ensure an <internal_reference> is added in the arrokkoth_porter_2024.lblx. --> Please also include the vector file mentioned during the review as well.