Extracted Fluxes and Derived Diameters of Comets from the NEOWISE Cryogenic Mission Liens
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Documentation
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file: 'overview.txt'
--> Needs to be expanded to provide an overview of the dataset (not just the paper). Instead of just "for more information", expand to include a narrative defining the parameters/terms in the tables and the methodologies used to derive the obtained values, and note that further details are given in Bauer et al. 2017.
--> Will the user be confused about talking about two CSV files and then talking about Table 1 and Table 3, with the noticeable omission of Table 2? Please clarify how the dataset tables correspond to the tables presented in the paper (e.g., stating that the dataset provides 2 tables corresponding to Table 1 and Table 3 from the paper).
--> Add a note stating that there is a VizieR/journal version of this dataset which is superseded by this PDS dataset.
--> Table 1 lists several references for the model number. These should either be included in overview.txt under References following the overview text (unless the collection itself has a reference file) or added to the labels with descriptions and DOIs, or it should be mentioned in the table description that these references are found in Bauer et al. 2017.

Data
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Both Tables (file: 'data/table*')
--> Explicitly state in the Product Description / table description that the terms and methodologies are described in Bauer et al. 2017.
--> The last column "Comet Type" heading/description as found in the PDS label and CSV header row says the values should be JFC or SPC, which is incorrect. It should be Long Period Comet (LPC) and SPC as is reflected in the CSV record values and overview document.
--> Target names are inconsistent between the different tables: Table 1 uses a format with underscores such as "C/2008_T2", whereas Table 3 uses spaces such as "C/2008 T2". Please make consistent.
--> Check values that do not make sense and/or are inconsistent with the VizieR catalog:
    - Model Number W4CS has a value of "3-Jan" (likely an auto-formatted "1,3").
    - VizieR has a set of upper limit detections of 2010 L5 that do not appear in the PDS version.
    - Beaming Parameter has positive values of "9.99" (e.g., for 17P) alongside "-9.99"; check if these are typos for "-9.99".
--> For the outlier comet C/2007 S2*, double-check the value and add a note explaining why this value is present.

Table 1
--> Table 1 has lots of data later than the stop time stated in the header. Please correct the stop time or verify the records.
--> Suggestions for descriptions/text:
    - Use "comet designation" rather than "comet name".
    - Either use "flux is from a" or "fluxes... are from a".
    - Change "...indicated in the eighth column (" to "...indicated as".
    - Remove "(Nf)".

Labels
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--> Note that in all PDS labels, Yanga R. "Fernandez" could be "Fernández" utilizing the diacritical marks.
--> The <Investigation_Area> <name> "The Near-Earth Object Wide-Field Infrared Explorer (NEOWISE) MIssion" is a typo ("MIssion" should be "Mission" with a lowercase "i", and "Survey" is missing from WISE). It appears to have been propagated from the context object, which has been updated and will be submitted for ingestion by SBN. Please ensure the labels reflect the corrected name.
--> Add external references (and their DOIs) that appear in the data tables to the label Reference_List, and include descriptions for those external references.

file: 'collection.xml'
--> SBN to coordinate and create DOI for collection.
--> Last author says "Wright10" but believe it should be "Wright".
--> Please add other metadata for each author and editor: person_orcid (if available), contributor_type (if known), Affiliation, and optionally sequence_number.
--> Please expand on the abstract, especially stating what the two included tables contain.
--> Action on PDS: Find a way to ensure comet surveys will be findable via search. This collection specifies the target as "Multiple Comets" of type Comet w/o a context reference.

file: 'data/table*'
--> The label says the first 3043 and 3604 bytes respectively are for the header, but it is actually the first 3042 and 3603 bytes respectively. That last byte is actually the first byte for the data portion and so it gets cut off when you load the data using the PDS label (e.g., "7P" becomes just "P"). Please update the object_length for the Header object and the offset for the Table_Delimited object.
--> Update the "Comet Type" column description in the PDS label from JFC/SPC to LPC/SPC.

file: 'document/BauerEtAl17_AJ_154_53_pdfA.xml'
--> Last author says "Wright10" but believe it should be "Wright".
--> Please add other metadata for each author and editor: person_orcid, contributor_type (if known), Affiliation, and optionally sequence_number.
--> Note: If providing the paper solely as a DOI reference rather than archiving the reproduced PDF article, remove this document product and ensure overview.txt is expanded accordingly. (If keeping the PDF, explicit AAS permission is not needed since the data provider is the author and it has a DOI).

EN Liens
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collection.xml
- Citation_Information/doi is missing